September 09, 2015 3 min read
Are you looking for a story to review the SGM® components in a group or to sharpen student awareness of narrative structure?
Miguel woke up to a bright, sunny morning. He couldn’t wait to go outside and play baseball! He had been looking forward to it all week and thought of nothing else. As he began to gather his ball and glove, he heard a knock on his bedroom door. “Just checking your room to see how all that cleaning looks,” said his mother. Miguel’s heart sank. He felt disappointed because he remembered that he couldn’t go outside until his room was set so he decided to drop his baseball equipment and start the chore.
First, he picked up all his clothes from the floor and put them in his basket. Next, he organized his papers and schoolbooks neatly on his desk. After that, he made his bed. Then, he put all his Legos back into the bin. Finally, Miguel called his mom.
Miguel’s mom came to his room. She took one look at his room and smiled at him. Miguel flew down the stairs and out the door! “Go Team!” he shouted happily. It was going to be a great day after all!
You may want to ask the following questions and use the SGM® Teacher Marker to “mark” the component(s) that answer these questions. This is also a great way to work with students who are having difficulty with the narrative structure.
After the students draw or stamp the icons on the story words themselves, you may want to think aloud and add details regarding each of the SGM® components:
Miguel is the character. One may brainstorm a character description using the following categories from our character map:
The setting is a bright, sunny Saturday morning. He “woke up to” communicates the fact that he was in his house, in the room where he slept.
The kick off, at first glance, is a knock on his bedroom door.
The feeling is communicated by the word “disappointed” but in teaching, we may call attention to the sentence “Miguel’s heart sank.” This sentence is a figurative language expression communicating the feeling of “disappointed.”
Attempts are all verbs: picked up, put, organized, made, put, called.
Direct Consequence of the attempts is that he cleaned his room and mom is pleased.
Resolution: Miguel is happy.
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